Well, there was one suggestion I made a little too late. I think you liked it too, because you said something like 'oh, now you tell me, after it's done.' ;) It's a very minor thing, like so many of the other things others notice and I don't, but this one has always stood out to me.

Basically, it's the ol' "In fact, I, uh...also thinking about our agreement" thing. The word 'was' should be in there, but I think the way they edited the scene cut it off either completely or to the point where there's so little of it left, it's buried.

I think all that would have to be done, much like how you inserted the "yeah" in the Falcon, would be to add an 's' sound in there. It doesn't even have to be 'was', just the end of it, so that it becomes sort of like 'zalso.'

Dig? Thoughts?