doubleofive said:

So you changed it so he doesn't have a stupid accent. There's not enough change there to warrant posting the whole thing really if you're just going to correct his grammar...

In that scene unfortunately it didnt need much changing which i realised half way through, much of that script as been cut due to Jar Jar originally pilotting and Obi Wan taking over. I have changed the reason why Jar Jar was banished because the explanation in the film was not even an explanation, it was some about a boom da gasser and crashen the bosses heyblebber or something like that, but as you have already said i have lost the accent, hopefully to be redubbed in an alien language and used as subtitles or in just english.