So you changed it so he doesn't have a stupid accent. There's not enough change there to warrant posting the whole thing really if you're just going to correct his grammar...
Post #380154
- Author
- doubleofive
- Parent topic
- The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/380154/action/topic#380154
- Date created
- 2-Oct-2009, 4:25 PM