The Gungan's need to drop some of their physical sillyness (it's not just Jar-Jar it's Boss Nass as well), which is why I mentioned the Hull...sorry...Slumberland edits where he pretty much fixed that.

Jar-Jar is still clumsy but not so clumsy it takes away from the story and Nass doesn't shake spit over everyone.

I would also like to see how this sort of work could get my linear Episode One to work better :

http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/The-Prequel-Radical-Redux-Ideas-Thread/post/365285/#post365285

With Jar-Jar already a naive and clumsy representative of the Gungans in the senate, on Coruscant with Queen Amidala when the invasion happens (literally a fish or amphibian out of water).

I'm going to post a link to this thread onto the Radical Redux Thread so people who read that one get a chance to see this.