Lovely work Angel, perhaps the engine glow is a bit too colourful, it might look a bit better shifted to the red side of the spectrum (more Tantive than Star Destroyer).
The only problem I have with the ROTS crawl is the first word "WAR!" the whole series is called Star Wars so why should we be surprised that there is a war going on (especially as this was underlined in the end coda of the previous episode)?