I wouldn't bother changing it at all, I think it looks perfectly fine. Maybe he's just of the mind that whether it's a galaxy or a forming star, we wouldn't see it rotating either way. But it is rather strange to see a star forming alone in space without some form of molecular cloud around it. Whether you subscribe to accretion models or otherwise, there needs to be some sort of material being drawn upon, far more massive than the accretion disk this star seems to have. Maybe it is just a galaxy?

Meh.

:-)