DarthBo said:
oh_riginal said:
RoccondilRinon said:
I like that. C-3PO's shortened line sounds so much more pitiful than the original, that it's almost an improvement.

I agree, even though that wasn't my intention at all. I just wanted Han's line to be spoken a second or two later, AFTER the cave appears onscreen, and I could either have had Han's and C-3PO's lines partially overlap, which I didn't want to do, or remove 3PO's line entirely, which I also didn't want to do. So I went halfway with the options. Leia's line is also delayed slightly, to keep the scene from having too big of a dialogue gap altogether.

I'm not a big fan of the shortened line. One problem remains though: Han still doesn't actually _look_ at the cave.

True. This scene is starting to feel like holes in a dam for me... I guess there just isn't a good way to really fix the scene, short of replacing the outside view of the cockpit, which is definitely beyond my skills in mock-ups. I give up on this scene, as I've done all I could.