doubleofive said:

See how the executor is front of the DS and the non overlapping relation puts the shot to be flat and one dimensional.

Also see that the light has not a proper source because it changes all the time (look the heads of han and chewie)

I d love to replace the first image you got there to a more dramatic one. i love that sometimes we have some good closeups in the DS but its rare.

An establishing-extended shot can be the viewer see some more of the construction and that thing is full of life not just a model.

A fun thought also is id like to put that ring ( half this time) to the wip section and play more clever instead putting boring ships all around ( im not saying not put at all)

-Angel