okay here's an update more in like with what i was intending...thoughts?
I also hd a bit of a tackle of the scene at the end with Dan. I really would recommend you try all other ideas before painting Dan out of these shots - there is a lot fo fine detail and also a lot of soft fucus stuff, which makes it a bit of a headache...
I'm not really satisfied with the result. Anyone else had a tinker with this? - or ideas on how to avoid it?