C3PX said:
Also, I like your idea of adding the ending quote from the GN before the credits. Have you considered adding all the chapter quotes into the film? Not sure if it would work, but I think it might be kind of cool to divide up the chapters with a fade to black>white text with quote>fade to next scene. Again, not sure if this would work, or just mess up the pacing, but at the moment it sure looks cool in my head as I imagine it.

I'd like to see that too...if it works. If you are going to do an edit like this then you may as well go all the way - otherwise it's just making a long movie longer.