RoccondilRinon said:
Brilliant work, SSWR. I'd reduce Padme's dialogue even further — none of the truly deeply stuff, it was badly delivered and I think just "I love you" does fine.

I missed Mace's "This party's over", but I think (short of inserting a "motherfucker" after it :-p) cutting it was the right decision.

I have to say, my favourite part was the music — you clearly know what you're doing, the main theme seems to have become Anakin's theme, and it and the fanfare theme is woefully underused in the PT.

Thanks for the feedback!

I'll look at cutting the rest of Padmes dialogue. I'm not sure...I understand what you're saying...but something else I try to consider is the pacing of the edit...if I cut too much dialogue these scenes fly by so quickly and no one can follow it. :D

"This party's over." Pretty much always got on my nerves...I can see how some might feel that it's kind of OT sounding...but I just don't like Sam's delivery.

I agree on the music...why didn't Johny Williams use more of the original themes?