Just not used to anyone outside of my immediate circle of geek friends or people in my scriptwriting classes wanting to see. I forgot where i was posting to for a second. Silly me. :P

Hm. My timeline of the last couple decades: 1993-1996 -- manifested Crohn's Disease, 1996-2004 -- managed Crohn's through the "if I ignore it it'll go away" method, 2004-2005 -- health failed and I started trying to manage things right, October 2005 (into November) -- spent six weeks in the hospital and almost died, spent ten months getting things turned around before i was strong enough for corrective surgery, and then another year before the second surgery to fix the damage from the first (since my body was still weak at the time).

All this to say, my mind was affected by my general deterioration, and other things I've seen of my work from that time weren't as good as I felt at the time. I haven't gone through my full script rewrite of Episode I since that time. Lemme take a pass before I post it to make sure. Episode II is about thirty pages of notes and scenes needing to be expanded the rest of the way out. And I'll wait on posting the link to my Episode III re-write until I've made sure the first two are presentable, so the thread of the story is consistent. I've taken this very seriously, as I've been a Star Wars fan pretty much my whole life, and the Prequels were such a letdown.

--Jonah