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Post #368277

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Sumguy21
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Star Wars: The Trilogy **PROJECT STALLED DUE TO HARD DRIVE FAILURE**
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Date created
2-Jul-2009, 6:56 PM

I'd remove the curved edges.

Also, take a look at places where two stroked edges almost meet, such as the "H" and "E" in the word "THE" for the RotJ and STR in "STRIKES." They look a bit awkward, I'd consider moving them apart just a bit so they don't look like they flow into eachother so much. This also goes for the "A" and the "C" in "BACK." 

Also take a look at the "E" in "THE" for ESB. I would remove the indentations for the "E" where the stroke tries to fill in the gaps in the letter.