Just a quick update on the progression

took out the horrible 'okaayyy' line in the elevator and fixed and trimmed up more of the scene and transitions

took out most o the first driving scene (no more... 'arseholes') except I am looking for some other footage from another movie I could splice in, preferably one wiht a car weavin in and out of traffic but its from the front of the car i.e. u dont see any of the bonnet... any ideas???

Smith no longer talks to the cat in the house

trying to figure out how to remove "how would a cat do this to me.. are you crazy' lines but it leads to some obvious jump cuts

trimmed out most of the talkin in the second car scene i.e. 'u like that... huh'

will use original ending (I thought hardwired was too abrupt after such a nice buildup) and start editing out taht as i need