adywan said:
i have decided that the design of the vane doesn't need to be radically changed. I'm still going to be making a model of it, but this is more to get rid of the flat painting than anything else. I'm just going to make the dome at the top slightly larger to accommodate the chamber. The way i see the scene is this:
Luke enters the door and it closes, shutting R2 out. He then walks down the long shaft of the vane and the platform lift takes him up to the carbon chamber. Do we need to see him walking down the tunnel? no. Does all this need to be explained in the edit? Again, no.
Adywan, now that I see your description here, it's interesting to see how differently you've happened to envisage this particular scene over the years, compared to the way I've always thought of it as being.
It seems that once Luke has been 'manipulated' (as per Vader's earlier instruction) into entering the area / room that R2 gets shut out of, and when that shot then ends....you imagine that Luke then accesses the long extended 'arm' tunnel towards the main 'vane' structure somewhere during this point....before we cut immediately to the next shot where the footage shows Luke rising upwards in a shaft into the 'Carbon Chamber' room, which would rightly be now inside the main 'vane' structure, because of the way you imagine his movement 'in-between' this particular cut....which means that when Vader falls and Luke jumps downwards to go after him, the 'tunnel' that Luke is then seen entering and then exiting out of, is totally within the confines of the main 'vane' structure....which rightly brings him out in line with the 'round window' positioned at a lower level than the 'Carbon Chamber' situated above....
Whereas I always imagined the footage like this - once Luke has entered the area / room that R2 gets shut out of, and when that shot ends....that unlike what the footage shows when we cut immediately to the next shot, I agree, Luke didn't rise directly upwards into the 'Carbon Chamber' at this point.
(he was already quite high up on Bespin city, whereas we know the 'vane' seems situated nearer the bottom of the overall city, although having said that, Luke eventually seems to fall a very great distance from where that 'vane' is situated in the footage....)
Rather, I thought that there was indeed some kind of 'in-between' travel during the shots at this point, except I imagined that instead of him accessing the long extended 'arm' tunnel....that he'd ended up in a lower level somewhere, before then rising upwards in a shaft into the 'Carbon Chamber'....which was still somewhere within the confines of the city's main body, near the 'surrounding' wall where the 'vane' juts out from....before Vader falls and Luke jumps downwards to go after him, meaning that the footage of the 'tunnel' we then see Luke entering and exiting out of, would actually be the long extended 'arm' leading to the main body of the 'vane'....
In this instance, I discount what some 'reference' books claim is the exact location for the 'Carbon Chamber', because the actual footage can be interpreted in either of the above ways, as it stands. There are good points for both versions, but neither seems to be without it's problems unfortunately -
In my scenario, the duel starts off in a secluded area (the 'Carbon Chamber') which is situated in a somewhat lower area of the city, before leading onto an even-more secluded and confined, nearby battle area (the main body of the 'vane'), due to Vader's unexpected fall, before ending on the outer ganty. Due to there being three seperate locations during the action, this gives a feeling of Luke being draw gradually into an even tighter situation over the course of the duel....
This scenario removes the problem that the 'vane' is too 'narrow' to accomodate the 'Carbon Chamber' near it's top in the current footage, as now the 'Carbon Chamber' is not in the 'vane' itself, but inside the 'surrounding' structure around the 'vane'.
Unfortunately, one drawback is to this scenario is that the current footage shows that the long extending 'arm' to the 'vane' is not in line with the 'round window' which is beside where Luke is seen exiting out of the 'tunnel'. (the new miniature 'vane' could be modified so that it is aligned, of course!)
As far as your own scenario goes, the duel starts and finishes in somewhat the same confined battle area (the main body of the 'vane'), but on different levels of it, due to Vader's fall, ending on it's gantry. I guess that Luke is imagined to initially go downwards a fair bit in your version too, compared to his starting-off point higher up in the city (where R2 is stopped from following), before he reaches and enters (unseen by us) the long extended 'arm' located far below him at that point, which led him to the main body of the 'vane'....
Since a new miniature 'vane' is planned, the issue of how the 'Carbon Chamber' fits in, can be allowed for. Although looking at some of the footage, the set looks like it was quite sizeable to me, so the adjusted miniature would probably need a sizeable modification to match. I have no problem with that however, as it will certainly make the 'vane' consistent with the 'set' for this scenario.
The amount of characters seen in the 'Carbon Chamber' previous to the duel, throws up a visual question for me though. We see that Vader....Boba Fett....some Stormtroopers....Lando Calrissian....Lobot....some Bespin Security Guards....a couple of Imperial Officers....some Ugnaughts....Han....Leia....and Chewbacca with C3PO on his back....are all seen in the 'Carbon Chamber' before the duel there. One of the reasons I assumed that it was located seperately, nearby the 'vane', was because I assumed that the footage of the 'tunnel' that Luke enters, was meant to be the actual long extended 'arm' itself, and therefore not a straight-forward access point for so many to have come and gone also. I thought that by being nearby, in the structure around the 'vane', that the 'Carbon Chamber' seemed easier for general access by this number of people, if located there instead. Although there are other possible ways for them all to get to the 'Carbon Chamber' if it's inside the 'vane', a seperate location within the nearby city structure just seemed a more straight-forward proposition going by the amount of activiy earlier.
However, although you plan to make the 'Luke in tunnel' footage seem just a part of the inside of the main body of the 'vane' now, rather than it showing how Luke got from the main body of the 'city' to the main body of the 'vane'....I'll very much look forward to seeing the current inconsistencies fixed, where the 'vane' shot exteriors are concerned, to allow for your preferred scenario.