Davnes007 said:
SilverKey said:
Davnes, since you are working on the meeting on Dagobah and the birth of the twins, can I make a suggestion? In ROTJ, Leia says she remembers her mother, but the birth scene in ROTS is the only time they spend together.

What I've done is removed the spot (in Jedi) where Luke says "...your real mother". It's not worth posting a 5 second change on YouTube...so may do some more work on that part to make it better.

SilverKey continued:

How about we make Leia being born the first. It wouldn't require a lot of editing, only switching around some dialogue. If we do this, Padme holds Leia for a while, and I was thinking of inserting a new shot of the baby opening her eyes, Padme looking at her, the baby looking back at her, with the Force theme playing underneath this little exchange. It's not much, but it could imply that the impression Leia has of her mother came to her through the Force.

Switching the dialog aroround would be very easy, but showing the baby's eyes opening would be A) Unrealistic; and B) Beyond my current skill set.

Thanx for your support SilverKey.

:)

I'm not sure if just removing the real from the line is enough.

From the way she describes her mother it's pretty clear it was originally meant to be the character that became Padme.

It might be better to show the twins being born and then do a series of time jumps showing the transition between the Republic era ships and Imperial era ships, (perhaps a few battles with the Alliance) the Clonetroopers and the Stormtroopers, have Padme die on Alderaan and see little Leia at her funeral on Alderaan (possibly aged 3 or 4) and finish with the construction of the Death Star with Peter playing Tarkin not Wayne in a Halloween mask.