I'll say this one more time, you can teach someone to draw, you can teach them to model, and yes you CAN teach them to edit... however, you cannot teach quality, you have to be able to see quality if you wish to attain it. I've tutored many students when I was in college, I've art directed in studio as well, and in my expierience theres a great divide between those who want to be congratulated for anything they do and those who want honest critique. I'm sorry Fishmanlee, but these clips are pretty bad, I would take ANY advice Ady has to give you very, very seriously.