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Post #361111

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fredstar
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STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW
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Date created
21-May-2009, 4:53 PM
vaderios said:
fredstar said:

Some things to make it better.

Eliminate the damn photoshop lens flares and use custom ones ;)

All the heroes are fade exept the Droids and boba. if you want to pop up, make them in different size.

Some slight motion blur to snow speeder.

Luke has some bad outlines. Manage to have all the heroes a uniform color and sharpness

Sabers can not overlap.

You have MF on the top right when the top left is empty, bad balance.

The orange sky thing dont work so well. maybe an other sky.

Add an asteroid field somewhere maybe.

You don't leave space for any titles.

 

Thats some things than can make it better

My 2 Credits.


-Angel

 

 

Cheers Angel, great constructive criticism / feedback. I agree, It definatly needs it's own lens flare, PS has terrible flares and I have made my own before so will use them instead.

 

I'm going to have to really clean up Lukes hair for him to have unnoticeable edges, it can be done so long as I get some spare time ;-)

 

And yes, a re-arangement is required for better balance. Those pesky drioids still anoy me and will probably use a bust shot of Boba and Yoda instead of a full body one.

Time to google image search again :-)

Chur.