corellian77 - I see that you re-positioned the 'cloud-car platform' IN FRONT of the 'tall, fat building' in your top mock-up above. Nice tweak. That was yet another poorly placed element in the current SE shot, compared to the bottom shot that came after it.
Unfortunately, the positioning of the 'tall, fat building' still seems in a different position to 'Leia's building' between the 2 shots, as things currently stand. It looks like it's somewhat in front of where 'Leia's apartment' would be in the shot above, but somewhere in the distance slightly behind and at the side of 'Leia's apartment' in the shot that comes afterwards.
I recently suggested removing the 'rising cloud-car' and 'platform' from one of the shots (ideally the one in the SE shot seen here), to imply there were 2 similar 'tall, fat buildings' nearby 'Leia's building' (one in front, and one slightly behind at the side), as a possible alternative. However, if Adywan decides to keep things much the same (although I'd like your tweak to the 'cloud-car platform's position if possible), then my alternative way of looking at the existing positioning of the 'tall, fat building, will be to imagine that 'Leia's buildiing' is actually WIDER than it seems from the angle we see it, and that the the top section where you removed the 'spires' is actually somewhere to the REAR of where Leia's 'corner' apartment is really situated! This gives me the impression that the 'tall, fat building' seen in both shots is slightly behind and to the side of 'Leia's building.... :)
It's a moving shot unfortunately, and tricky to alter, so barring cutting before we get to this point (which would kinda spoil the flow of the SE shot), it won't be a biggie to me at the end of the day.