vaderios said:Darth Lars said:What do you think? Should I paint a mock-up?
YES!!!
OK then.
The mock-up is a little bit messy, but I hope that I can get the idea across.
I think that it would be easiest to change anything in this shot only because it is a static painting with overlayed elements and not a flying camera.
The "fat building" behind the platform has been lowered to align the platform's height with that seen in the previous shot. The alignment is also better with the round-topped structure to the left of the fat building.
The "Tyrell Corp" building has been heightened and move to the back. Leia's apartment is now in a separate tower, outcropping from the main structure, but lower than it.
By the way, having a higher building behind Leia's tower would also help continuity with a shot later when Lando enters the apartment by walking down a flight of stairs into the room and we get to see the corridor outside being at a higher level.
A large building in the far back has been reinserted from the O-OT to add depth in the image. (it looks bad here because I cut and pasted from OOT and Adywan's color-corrected SE)