very nice, love the ot music too. You should take a look back at Trooperman version of the scene, It's hard to remember of the top of my head but from what I do
New start
Anakin kicks those bugs buts before they even fire a shot
Color correction
When the big metal pole hits him, is because he's distracted by padmes scream
R2 saves the day without flying, it's a surprise
All in all win
I like the start to this one too, very unique!