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JasonN's PT FanEdits (Attack of the Federation, Twilight of the Republic, & The Black Knight Rises) (Released) ** Revised V3 Cuts In The Works — Page 10

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Jedi Dark Knight said:

Religion has nothing to do with dispatching the two Jedi, Obi-Wan is a threat on a political level since he knows the TF Viceroy is behind the attempt on Padme's life, Obi-Wan was a hostage, from every point of view if he is starting a war, which is why he is building so many battle droids, if he leaves two Jedi out there they could heal and come after him, tactics in war dictate he should have finished them, religion or no religion, at that point they were beyond politics and right into open war tactics, and tacts indicate dispatch your heavy threats....leaving that just makes him a weak character.


So choosing not to slay an opponent because they're no longer pose a threat, because they were trained in the same noble Order of Jedi that you were/are in, and because all you want to do is escape without confrontation with said Order makes you a weak character?

Sh*t, I guess then because Anakin choose to slaughter over a dozen children because they might become a potental threat to the Emperor, that makes him a STRONG character.... :/

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Akwat Kbrana said:

Also, vis-a-vis Dooku leaving after taking out Obi-Wan and Anakin...I think the idea is that he's a Jedi, not a Sith in these fanedits. Thus, he has no reason to murder them; he only needs to neutralize them so he can make his escape. Their disagreement is primarily political, not religious.

 

 Religion has nothing to do with dispatching the two Jedi, Obi-Wan is a threat on a political level since he knows the TF Viceroy is behind the attempt on Padme's life, Obi-Wan was a hostage, from every point of view if he is starting a war, which is why he is building so many battle droids, if he leaves two Jedi out there they could heal and come after him, tactics in war dictate he should have finished them, religion or no religion, at that point they were beyond politics and right into open war tactics, and tacts indicate dispatch your heavy threats....leaving that just makes him a weak character. But as Jason N said: whatever....

That's just idiotic. To engage the enemy in armed combat is noble and permitted by the Jedi code. To mercilessly cut down an unarmed opponent is not. Dooku, being a Jedi, is idealogically and religiously restrained from committing murder. Whether or not something is politically expedient is, to a Jedi, entirely secondary to whether or not it's morally right.

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See? Dooku is a Sith by cutting out his affiliation all this argument arises. The moment you put him as a "Dark Jedi" whatever you wanna call him he is somewhat difficult to explain, if he is a noble Jedi, why use the sith lightning? if he is a noble Jedi why go and cut Anakins arm? he could have "disabled" them with a less aggressive touch......you are actually hammering my point. Dooku is a Sith, but whatever, you don't like his sith status, fine....

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"Now the Jedi are all but extinct" - Obi-Wan Kenobi, ANH

"I hate old times" - Batman to John Stewart, A Better World
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No one said he was a "Dark Jedi," only a rogue Jedi, i.e., a Jedi who has broken off from the official "Jedi Order" for political reasons. You assume that anyone who uses the force outside of the official "Jedi Order" is automatically a sith, which is absurd and baseless. As for cutting off arms, remember that Obi-Wan Kenobi lops off that arms of Zam in AOTC and Dr. Evazan in ANH, not to mention multiple of Anakin's limbs in ROTS. Does that make him somehow ignoble? As for the lightning, you're begging the question by calling it "Sith Lightning." Notice that it was just one quick burst rather than the concentrated dose that Palpy fires into people. It only served the knock Anakin across the room. That being the case, I don't see how it's any more evil than using telekenisis to hurl your enemies around, which "good" Jedi are doing all the time!

Your arguments = fail

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You assume that there can actually BE rogue Jedi, which no where in the cannon has been stated there are any. (Ki-Adi Mundi calls him a political idealist not a murderer but we know what happens next in the original movie), second I said "whatever you wanna call him" because I knew you would nit pick at what I say, let's keep a broad sense here. Anyone who uses the Force for evil reasons yes should be considered evil *as in sith* (if you disagree that's a different argument), evil as in provoque war, taking hostage Obi1 and using the (yes!) sith lightning since Yoda who is just as powerful if not more than Dooku NEVER used it, the only other Force-user to use the lightning is Darth Sidious, a sith. Obi-Wan cuts off the arms in self defense, you can argue Dooku was using it in self defense to, but then why not just spar? after all they are using lightsabers not blasters like Zam and with Dr Evazan we don't know what he was going to pull out, the Bartender yelled "no blasters" but that happens so quick that we don't know, but with Dooku We DO know, they where sparring and Dooku went for the cutting move. One quick burst makes no difference *he just used the Dark side once* c'mon, it's sith lightning, if you don't see it how that is more evil than hurling your enemies then you should understand what sith lightning does, EU you argue? fine, then don't but it does affect more than hurling. More so, if you wanna keep Dooku a "rogue Jedi" (which you can in the end whatever..) why would a Rogue Jedi be in league with Darth Sidious, we know the separatists where with him (Grievous talks to him as Master) and he was with the separatists. To take Doooku out of the sith order as it seems you wanna go it's not just changing his color and leaving out the "sith parts" it's also about behavior.....

"For over a thousand generations, the Jedi Knights were the guardians of peace and justice in the Old Republic. Before the dark times... before the Empire." - Obi-Wan Kenobi, ANH

"Now the Jedi are all but extinct" - Obi-Wan Kenobi, ANH

"I hate old times" - Batman to John Stewart, A Better World
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Jedi Dark Knight said:

You assume that there can actually BE rogue Jedi, which no where in the cannon has been stated there are any. (Ki-Adi Mundi calls him a political idealist not a murderer but we know what happens next in the original movie), second I said "whatever you wanna call him" because I knew you would nit pick at what I say, let's keep a broad sense here. Anyone who uses the Force for evil reasons yes should be considered evil *as in sith* (if you disagree that's a different argument), evil as in provoque war, taking hostage Obi1 and using the (yes!) sith lightning since Yoda who is just as powerful if not more than Dooku NEVER used it, the only other Force-user to use the lightning is Darth Sidious, a sith. Obi-Wan cuts off the arms in self defense, you can argue Dooku was using it in self defense to, but then why not just spar? after all they are using lightsabers not blasters like Zam and with Dr Evazan we don't know what he was going to pull out, the Bartender yelled "no blasters" but that happens so quick that we don't know, but with Dooku We DO know, they where sparring and Dooku went for the cutting move. One quick burst makes no difference *he just used the Dark side once* c'mon, it's sith lightning, if you don't see it how that is more evil than hurling your enemies then you should understand what sith lightning does, EU you argue? fine, then don't but it does affect more than hurling. More so, if you wanna keep Dooku a "rogue Jedi" (which you can in the end whatever..) why would a Rogue Jedi be in league with Darth Sidious, we know the separatists where with him (Grievous talks to him as Master) and he was with the separatists. To take Doooku out of the sith order as it seems you wanna go it's not just changing his color and leaving out the "sith parts" it's also about behavior.....

.... did you even watch my EP2 edit?


1. There is absolutely NO MENTION of Dooku or the Seperatists being in league with or serving Darth Sidious
in this fanedit: in fact, they are rebelling against the Republic BECAUSE of the threat of Darth Sidious and his gaining power over the Galactic Senate/Senators.


2A. Unless it's specifically called "Sith Lightning" (which it isn't) or specifically stated that that ability is linked to the Dark Side (which it isn't) directly in the films themselves, then I'm going to assume that it's a high-level Force ability.

2B. At one point, Dooku actually refers to it as a "Jedi power" when talking to Obi-Wan.

2C. I don't know, care about, or have any interest in the EU and I have no intention of using any of it in my SW fanedits.

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I watched your Ep2 edit (read my posts please before firing turbolasers). The underlined argument you point at is of Ep3 (I have not yet seen BKR).

 

1. You made my point in AOTF: the Federation IS in league with Darth Sidious, by TOTR Dooku makes the point that the Federation turned from Sidious and seeked him out, why would they do that? why would the be angry at the Republic in Ep1? taxation? so because of Taxation they ally themselves with the Sith, and after AOTF they cut off the Sith deal and seek Dooku? for what? to continue to argue against taxation or because now the Sith allegedly control The Republic? motivation is not explained, we have to just assume. Ok you want to leave Dooku and the separatists as acting by themselves? fine (it's your edit) but then the question is why break off? because of the Sith? how do the separatists know a Sith is bad? Dooku could know, but the rest wouldn't, or are they breaking off because of taxation? corruption in the senate? The separatists have a great influence in the Senate (in AOTF the Federation Senator has a good point in the senate diminishing Amidala's request and having the rest agree with him) why would they be angry at the corruption in the Senate?

2. So just because it's not called sith lightning in the movies specifically you dismiss it? maybe you want Rick Ollie saying "look there's sith-lightning, he must be a Sith! and it looks painful" you want that level of exposition in the movie? oooook! I though you hated it and that's why you edited in AOTF (good call btw). How about Yoda NEVER using it, are we to assume then that the Emperor is more powerful than Yoda? or that Yoda simply doesn't want to use it (because it's painful - look at Luke's/Anakin's face, IT hurts)?

3. I hate EU too, but the notion that Jedi can leave the Republic and be Dark/Rogue/Independent/Purple/Freelance Jedi or any of that non-sense is EU too. BTW.

"For over a thousand generations, the Jedi Knights were the guardians of peace and justice in the Old Republic. Before the dark times... before the Empire." - Obi-Wan Kenobi, ANH

"Now the Jedi are all but extinct" - Obi-Wan Kenobi, ANH

"I hate old times" - Batman to John Stewart, A Better World
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Jedi Dark Knight said:

You assume that there can actually BE rogue Jedi, which no where in the cannon has been stated there are any.

You're assuming that absence of evidence is de facto evidence of absence, a fallacy commonly committed by first-year logic students. That a force user could of their own free will choose to secede from the "Jedi Order" that is a political entity, yet retain Jedi ideals and beliefs, is a lot more reasonable and rational that assuming that anyone who can use the force and doesn't sign on with the "Jedi Order" automatically becomes an evil Sith dark-side user. Since your position is the more irrational, the burden of proof rests on you to demonstrate that there couldn't be a rogue Jedi, rather than just clinging to an argument from silence.

Anyone who uses the Force for evil reasons yes should be considered evil *as in sith* (if you disagree that's a different argument), evil as in provoque war, taking hostage Obi1 and using the (yes!) sith lightning...

This is just absurd. I don't recall the Force ever being used to provoke war in these fanedits; that was a political move, and a perfectly justified one if the corruption showcased in Ep. I is any indication. Taking Obi-Wan hostage was A.) provoked, since Obi-Wan was tresspassing on private property, and B.) not really even Dooku's doing in this fanedit. The Geonosians are the ones responsible for the execution, and Dooku appears to be an allied guest.

since Yoda who is just as powerful if not more than Dooku NEVER used it, the only other Force-user to use the lightning is Darth Sidious, a sith.

Again, an argument from silence, and a rather silly one. This is also a "poisoning the well" fallacy. Just because an evil person uses a Force power, doesn't mean that everyone else who uses it must also be evil. I might just as easily argue that Luke is evil since he uses "Sith Choke" in ROTJ, and the only other person who uses that power is Vader, a sith. But of course, that would be silly and irrational, so I only bring it up for the sake of comparison.

Obi-Wan cuts off the arms in self defense, you can argue Dooku was using it in self defense to, but then why not just spar? after all they are using lightsabers not blasters like Zam and with Dr Evazan we don't know what he was going to pull out, the Bartender yelled "no blasters" but that happens so quick that we don't know, but with Dooku We DO know, they where sparring and Dooku went for the cutting move.

So? Obi-Wan does the same during a lightsaber duel in ROTS; do you intend to argue that he, too, is a sith?

One quick burst makes no difference *he just used the Dark side once* c'mon, it's sith lightning, if you don't see it how that is more evil than hurling your enemies then you should understand what sith lightning does, EU you argue? fine, then don't but it does affect more than hurling.

I'm not entirely sure I understand what you're getting at; the jumbled grammar is incredibly confusing and difficult to decode. But I think you're saying that force lighting is sith lighting because it's sith lighting (which is pure tautology; you cannot win an argument simply by repeating yourself ad infinitum, ad nauseum), and that it does affect the person against whom it is directed moreso than telekenisis would (which is demonstrably untrue, since Anakin just a few moments later springs back into action with all all the vigor and enthusiasm he had before.) As for the EU, I don't recall ever bringing it up. Review my posts, if you like.

More so, if you wanna keep Dooku a "rogue Jedi" (which you can in the end whatever..) why would a Rogue Jedi be in league with Darth Sidious, we know the separatists where with him (Grievous talks to him as Master) and he was with the separatists. To take Doooku out of the sith order as it seems you wanna go it's not just changing his color and leaving out the "sith parts" it's also about behavior.....

As JasonN has explained (and as you would know if you'd carefully watched these edits), there is absolutely no collaboration in these films between Sidious and the Seperatist movement, or between Sidious and Dooku. As for Dooku's behavior, I fail to see how it's any more sithish than any of the Jedi in these films. Could you demonstrate any place that he actually does anything evil? As I recall, he attended a business meeting on an allied planet, which is crashed by hostile invaders. Dooku tries to establish a treaty with the invaders, thereby persuading the Geonosians to spare their lives, but they refuse, so Dooku is helpless to do anything more. At the last minute, the invaders' army shows up, so Dooku tries to escape. Two Jedi corner him and engage (remember, Anakin made the first move, so the lightning was in self-defense). Dooku out-duels and neutralizes them, but mercifully allows them to live. In the third film, he takes Palpatine (a.k.a. Darth Sidious) as a political prisoner, and is mercilessly decapitated by the same Jedi that he had earlier spared in an attempt to prevent a rescue operation.

Heck, compared to the overwhelming majority of proper Jedi in these films, Dooku comes out smelling rosy! Going by JasonN's edits, if I was involved in the Clone Wars, I'd sign up with the Separatists: they're the ones seeking to end the corrupt Republic that is under direct control of the Sith Lord that you so eschew.

So just because it's not called sith lightning in the movies specifically you dismiss it? maybe you want Rick Ollie saying "look there's sith-lightning, he must be a Sith! and it looks painful" you want that level of exposition in the movie? oooook! I though you hated it and that's why you edited in AOTF (good call btw). How about Yoda NEVER using it, are we to assume then that the Emperor is more powerful than Yoda? or that Yoda simply doesn't want to use it (because it's painful - look at Luke's/Anakin's face, IT hurts)?

Again, with the seemingly unending arguments from silence! How do you know the Yoda never uses it? Just because it isn't shown? Talk about faulty logic! There are plenty of rational arguments for why we never see Yoda use force lightning. Perhaps because, as he demonstrates in the theatrical cuts, it's too easy to deflect. Perhaps because he personally prefers other techniques. Perhaps because his species is unable to use it. Perhaps he has used lightning, but it's never shown onscreen simply because we don't ever see him fight (save for decapitating the clonetroopers on Kashyyyk). The list could go on and on and on, but you blockheadedly insist that the only reason must be that it's evil. This line of argumentation is laughably absurd.

3. I hate EU too, but the notion that Jedi can leave the Republic and be Dark/Rogue/Independent/Purple/Freelance Jedi or any of that non-sense is EU too. BTW.

The reason being that it makes perfect sense. Why wouldn't they be able to? With how over-the-top preachy, restrictive, and Pharisaical the PT Jedi Order is, why wouldn't droves of Jedi leave and start their own order? Or go vigilante-Jedi? As I've said before, your position is the more irrational, so you need to demonstrate why it wouldn't be possible rather than just unremittingly repeating your assertion.

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If people want to continue this stupid argument via PM, go ahead - frankly, I'm damn tired of it.

For those that care, the DVDs are done and will be in the mail tomorrow to my friend for RS upload.

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Good news, Jason.  I'll check them out.

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JasonN,

Will there be torrents for the final DVDs? I've gotten interested in checking out your edits from all the buzz (or is it "fuss") they've caused in this thread ;)

I'm looking forward to watching your edit of Episode III. I've come to realize that Episode III is the true litmus test of a PT fanedit.

I haven't seen this mentioned, but in Episode III did you remove Dooku's stupid flip-jump from the balcony before the duel? God how I hate that.

You know of the rebellion against the Empire?

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Erikstormtrooper said:

JasonN,

Will there be torrents for the final DVDs? I've gotten interested in checking out your edits from all the buzz (or is it "fuss") they've caused in this thread ;)

I'm looking forward to watching your edit of Episode III. I've come to realize that Episode III is the true litmus test of a PT fanedit.

I haven't seen this mentioned, but in Episode III did you remove Dooku's stupid flip-jump from the balcony before the duel? God how I hate that.

If there are torrents of the DVDs, I won't re responsible for making them since the upload speeds of my internet are terrible.

I'd wait to watch the DVD version of EP3 since I did some scene rearrangement and one scene deletion to the fanedit after I made the AVI version.

Yes, I deleted the "Dooku flip" shot from the Duel sequence. ;)

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Someone is saying here that because Dooku uses force lightning (it's actual name), he's automatically evil. All he does in the film (fanedit anyway) is to use it to knock down Anakin, he doesn't keep in on him any longer than needed.

 

I don't see how that qualifies as evil. As someone else said, Luke briefly uses force choke in ROTJ, does that make him evil?

 

Also, really now, how can you make it so black and white. Jedi = good, sith = bad? Did you see what Obi-Wan did to Anakin in ROTS? His former friend (and "brother" no less), and he lops off his limbs, and leaves him to burn alive, until he's died of suffocation. That's cold. If he was really a rightous Jedi, he would have finished him off to spare him such a painful death. What was stopping him going down there and quickly cutting off his head to give him a merciful death? It certainly wasn't "he couldn't bare to", he could bare to mutilate him and watch him burn.

 

That's not much of a Jedi, and I don't see anything Dooku does, especially in these fanedits, that's worse than that.

 

I've watched AOTF, and TOTR so far, and the'yre pretty good. i still have some niggles, only a couple in AOTF, jsut a couple of lines or tiny cuts I disagree with, but there's a few scenes in TOTR I think should have been cut, or left in. Some scenes definitely felt "cut up", the dialogue didn't flow (not that any of the AOTC romance scenes flowed though) right, like they stopped and started a lot. I love what you did with Dooku though, he's a more interesting character now that's he's truly not Jedi nor Sith, but grey. I'm looking forward to TBKR, now, though I'm confused as to how the movie's climax will work without the Yoda/Sidious duel (not saying it was  any good, but won't Yoda just sort of vanish, without even trying to stand up to the Emperor?).

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Ithilgore said:

I'm looking forward to TBKR, now, though I'm confused as to how the movie's climax will work without the Yoda/Sidious duel (not saying it was  any good, but won't Yoda just sort of vanish, without even trying to stand up to the Emperor?).

I wouldn't say that he "vanishes" from the movie, but his roles in my Prequel edits is essentually that of a side/secondary character to the story, so it doesn't bother me at all that I completely removed his challenging the Emperor, getting his green ass beaten, and retreats from the planet "in exile" (seriously Lucas, he loses once and so he decides never to fight the Emperor again?! What a little green chickensh*t.....)

(the last shot of him in TBKR is him turning away from the dead Padme, BTW)

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My friend recieved the DVDs today and will start uploading them shortly. :)

Just for reference sake, remember that these are DL DVD releases (for optimal video/audio quality).

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oo nice, wasn't sure if they'd be DL. =)

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Although I could not get a soul to help me out here (despite the number of copies of edits I've made for folks) :: grumble ::  a friend came through and I finally had a chance to see these. Twilight of the Republic and The Black Knight Rises stood out for me the most. Incredibly well done, with some very intelligent cuts. The only edit that didn't work for me was cutting Shmi's death and Anakin's attack on the Sand People, as these are pivotal to his taking his first step toward the Dark Side. Otherwise, they were near perfect.

Wanna trade fan edits?

http://chad-moore.blogspot.com/

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DVD-9 versions of all three fanedits are now available.
(Special thanks to elbarto1 of "fanedit.org" for WinRARing and uploading the DVDs for me)

RS links are available on fanedit.info

EDIT: It appears that linktalk is becoming a poor place for fanedit downloads (from the sounds of things, now only donators can see the links, it seems...). Because of these changes, I ask that people please go to fanedit.info instead if you want to find my Prequel DVDs.

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too bad I dont' have an RS account anymore.  Oh the irony.

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It appears that linktalk is becoming a poor place for fanedit downloads (from the sounds of things, now only donators can see the links, it seems...).

Because of these changes, I ask that people please go to fanedit.info instead if you want to find my SW Prequel DVDs.

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You don't need to donate.  You either need 20 posts in the forum, or you need to post in the thread with the links, at which point the links will become visible.

At any rate, I can see the links, and I've never donated.

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I don't exact what the f**k is going on specifically between FE.org and linktalk, all I know is what Boon23 was discussing over at the FE forum (that his and ab5tract's mod status at linktalk was taken away, that linktalk admin Fellowsurfer was complaining to them via PM about lack of donations to the site, that all references to FE.org have been removed from the "Home Away From Home" thread has been removed, and that the fanedits section was switching over or had already switched over to 'donators only').

Since FE now had the fanedit.info site to store DL links (and I don't want to get super involved in this Boon/Fellowsurfer affair), I'm just going to keep my Prequel DVDs off of linktalk for the time being.

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If anyone needs a helping hand getting copies of these edits, send me a PM and I'll see what I can do. Not all of us are able to download stuff, so I'm more than happy to trade.

Wanna trade fan edits?

http://chad-moore.blogspot.com/