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sgdelta1771
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STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW
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12-May-2009, 6:57 PM
vaderios said:

 

-Angel

There's still something wrong with both pictures: the perspective is way off.  Not only does this shot make Cloud city look as if one end of the city is tipped towards the sky, but in regards to the foreground set with the Slave and the little background buildings, the perspective is off there as well.. I think more buildings should be added here and a new sky complete with a horizon to make things a bit more interesting and 3-dimensional.

This is what I've done personally to this scene:

Some perspective has been corrected; a few more buildings and a new sky with a more visible horizon has been added to correct such issues.  Also note the thick top layer of clouds behind the buildings - a similar effect can be seen from outside the airplane window.  Quite weak for a mock-up, but I did my best, I guess it's up to ady to decide now.

-SGDelta