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Post #359755

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JasonN
Parent topic
JasonN's PT FanEdits (Attack of the Federation, Twilight of the Republic, & The Black Knight Rises) (Released) ** Revised V3 Cuts In The Works
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Date created
12-May-2009, 6:39 PM
ChainsawAsh said:

Jason, what do you think about cutting the library scene and the "right where it's supposed to be" reference?  Those two things really do make the whole Kamino subplot more confusing in your edit.  If all he has to go on is the name, and it's been erased from the Archives, how does he know where it is?  Better to assume he got the location from the Archives.  It doesn't really hurt anything in my opinion, it just helps the understanding of that subplot.

Maybe I'll cut the "right where it's supposed to be" line, but I'm extremely hesitent on cutting the library scenes, as it serves as a setup for the later "Obi-Wan/Mace" scene and the "deletion of Kamino" subplot plays a bit into the "Syfo-Dias/Clone Army Conspiracy" subplots (obviously, someone's trying to hide information on Kamino from the Jedi by deleting the Archive records of the planet)