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The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread — Page 49

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Bingowings said:

IG-88 and 4-LOM would beg to differ with you on that one SSWR ;-)

 

 Wait...what?

Lucas pulled the old 'let's just talk about it and not show it' gag. The battle droids have been apart of all three movies...why shouldn't they be shown shutting down? It's kind of momentous occasion right?

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BarBar Jinkx said:
Darth Piccolo said:

here is an idea for ep III in the scene of the clones storming the jedi temple, remove anakin from it so instad palpatine sends anakin immediately to mustafa to kill the seperatist

didn't ben say 

"Vader hunted down & Killed the Jedi"

in ANH?

Well, yes, but there's no reason that couldn't have been after Order 66 and the formation of the Empire.  We see several Jedi killed, and the Temple is ransacked, but odds are some would have survived.  Yoda and Obiwan send out the signal telling surviving Jedi to go to ground and hide, after all (or was that just in the deleted scene?  I can't remember).  Either way, we can't just assume that none of that happened between Episodes III and IV.

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sketchrob,

I hope you don't mind, but I did a little more work to your perspective drawing to give it more of a feel like an old 70's sci-fi movie closer to the original trilogy.

 

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Sluggo said:

sketchrob,

I hope you don't mind, but I did a little more work to your perspective drawing to give it more of a feel like an old 70's sci-fi movie closer to the original trilogy.

This is the ultimate in fan editing, redesigning mock-ups... pure awesome lol Almost has a Bruckheimer feel... OPERATION:BLACKHOLE... *best LaFontaynne voice* In a world without practical effects, one man designs it all.... in a computer"

 

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SomethingStarWarsRelated said:
Bingowings said:

IG-88 and 4-LOM would beg to differ with you on that one SSWR ;-)

 

 Wait...what?

Lucas pulled the old 'let's just talk about it and not show it' gag. The battle droids have been apart of all three movies...why shouldn't they be shown shutting down? It's kind of momentous occasion right?

I was writing in response to your comment -

That dialouge from Palps explains why there are no battle droids in the OT but it goes by so quickly...I think it's important to show.

It doesn't chime with the evidence:

4-LOM

IG-88

 

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I went ahead and made a Kamino matte in case anyone wants a crack at redesigning the city...

Heres a quick mockup to convey what I was saying earlier...

 

 

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Looks great, sketchrob.

Though personally, I like the design of Kamino. If anything, I'd like Tipoca City to be much bigger in the establishing shot. It always seemed kinda small to me, especially once you see it from the inside, with those enormous rooms where they grow and train the clones.

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SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

Ok, so, Davnes, I'm not trying to step on you're toes...but I firgued I should post what I was working on:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1uk8pB0nnu0

Oh...I should mention I really like what you made, Davnes...I hadn't even thought about Yoda being *outside* the ship...thanks for the idea! :D

That works out quite well.  In fact, when Yoda leaves Coruscant, you could edit it as:

(1) delete the obvious line about "in exile I must go" and maybe add some TIEs or similar ships coming underneath the Senate building ala the EMPIRE Bespin escape and have Bail say something along the line of: "we have to escape!"  Either Yoda can destroy the fighters using the Force to allow their escape, or you have them enter the higher cloud levels, fly into the Tantive IV hanger (while still chased to keep tension level), the Tantive heads out to space as we see Star Destroyers closing in and they jump into hyperspace.

(2) you could either cut back-and-forth between this sequence and the Obi-Darth fight, or segway after the hyperspace jump (which could allow an editor to slip in the spinning star field shot) to the lead up to the fight.

(3) end the fight with Obi and Vader with Vader/Anakin burning on the shore (no emperor coming over to get him), leaves Mustafar..

(4) to segway to the scene you show above, which has Bail and Yoda already on Dagobah waiting for Obi to arrive.  Either Obi used the same intuition Luke did in EMPIRE to find Yoda/Dagobah, or in an earlier scene (maybe even near the end of ATTACK OF THE CLONES) Yoda mentions to the other Jedi (not just Ben) that if things go badly to meet up on Dagobah, which could be the Jedi's "hidden fortress", ala the Temple in LOST (which also has mysterious healing properties).

On a side note, if anyone thinks of incorporating the Kaiber crystal back into the movies (whether all of them or just the Prequels) could one take scenes from SUPERMAN and recolor the green crystal to red (maybe alter Chris Reeve's face or make him an extra Jedi character and keep the John Williams music to a degree - alter or delete the obvious SUPERMAN notes but keep the background choir)?

 

         

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Bingowings said:

The only way I can think of preserving the Vader surprise and keep the iconic Obi-Wan/Vader fight is something like this (Maul covered his face with ink but we know Vader didn't do that from ROTJ so a mask seems to make sense) :

Proto Vader

But Lord help the poor bugger who tries it.

You'd have to establish that Obi-Wan had other pupils (not just Anakin), the dreaded, "you were my greatest student" cliche' and then go through every frame of the final duel and cover Anakin up so you assume he died saving Mace (and as I said before because Palpatine is so confident of his new apprentice turning you could have him refer to Vader before Anakin's final fall).

So much hard work just to cover up George's terrible screw ups.

I like the idea, but it may be easier to replace Obi's head with Mace's or someone elses.  That would leave the work down to a replacement head as opposed to an entire body.

In response to previous posts, I still prefer the Grevious/Maul connection, but not "Grevious as Vader".

Regardless, HOW anyone goes about this is going to be DIFFICULT to say the least to make any edit so the OT payoffs are still a surprise. 

(1) I like the Youtube clips posted showing Anakin with the red saber, which helps tell who-is-who during the fight; at the same time, it is a dead giveaway for Anakin being Vader, even if you don't call Anakin "Vader".

(2) you can replace Obi with Mace (and have purple against blue, or if you have all Jedi have blue sabers per the earlier post of Jedi having the same color sabers) or keep it "as-is", you still have the visual problem of not being able to tell who is who in the fight, especially the long shots.

(3) you can replace Anakin with an earlier, cruder "Vader" complete with Samurai-esque armor, but the WORK it would take would be tremendous to get it to look right, though your plot points above Bingo could work. 

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In fact, maybe this could be a plot point for the Sith:
maybe all of the Sith members were killed at some point, brought back with the Dark Side of the Force (hereby known as DSOF) and made into cyborgs in a similar way that light sabers were created by combining "magic" with technology. 

It is only through the mastery of the DSOF that said Sith Lord is able to rebuild or recreate a body for themself (the Emperor/Senator Palpatine could have a different reason for looking the way he does: instead of Mace reflecting the lightning, maybe the Senator went out into battle ala Julius Caeser and is horribly wounded, thus it is only through the DSOF that he is healed and transformed into a truly evil man.  I always thought the build up to the Emperor should have had a man who started off good - a "good king" ala Arthur - but was corrupted into an Uther or Mordred type - think the movie EXCALIBUR but play it backwards character-wise so to speak)

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Also also, I would add these considerations too:

(1) alter/change the Jedi hunting sequences so they aren't simply shot by generic clones/stormtrooper types.  I do not know how you would go about this, but to maybe take clips from other movies to show Sith Knights hunting and fighting Jedi Knights by taking scenes from say the beginning of KINGDOM OF HEAVEN (when Liam Neeson and his men are ambushed in the woods) or other such movies, rotoscoping light sabers over the swords and show them taken down by those who actually COULD.

Hell, one of the best things about that fan-made trailer for THE PHANTOM MENACE was the altered BRAVEHEART scene with all of the "scots" running into battle with lightsabers on.  If anyone could incorporate such scenes convincingly (for that one, change the grass to sand and place it into AOTC), that would still be better than what we got.

(2) have the jedi temple destroyed from a Star Destroyer fleet bombardment.  Whether you make the Jedi temple floating over the regular human city world or on the ground (I still would like to see the Jedi's in a floating city, not just for looks but to signify their attitudes and their disconnect with the people below - which all leads to their literal downfall: if said bombardment is done on said floating city, you could show the city/temple crashing into Coruscant)

Regardless, anything to make the end of the Jedi far more dramatic than what we see...

         

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Bingowings said:

4-LOM IG-88

 

Maybe we can see more of these guys in the Prequel edits?  Imagine an army of IG-88s!  For that matter, how hard would it be to make the regular army robots look more like IG-88 (at least for the head region - even if you didn't make them conical like the Nomad probe in the STAR TREK show, if you could add more bumps and knobs as well as the red lights...)

BTW, anyone else notice that the first robot has C3PO's body?

         

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sketchrob said:

Heres a quick mockup to convey what I was saying earlier...

 

That's it!  Looks MUCH better than the original.  I also love the spotlights emitting from the cities as well.

 

         

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Monroville said:
sketchrob said:

Heres a quick mockup to convey what I was saying earlier...

 

That's it!  Looks MUCH better than the original.  I also love the spotlights emitting from the cities as well.

 

Thx!! The basic idea is that since its a dark world with storms and water, they use the lights as recognition patterns to be seen from above. I think underwater the cities would something more akin to the alien city in "The Abyss".

 

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adywan said:

Why does GL suddenly think so many things need so much explanation? The "bring my shuttle" line explains how he got from bespin to the Executor so do we need to see the shuttle waiting for him or his journey to the executor, No?

If you apply this (leaving more movie elements for the audience to figure out as opposed to showing every bloody thing) to the PT:Rs (when you get to them) this alone should edit a good 20 minutes or more out of a lot of them.

There is also the issue with:
(1) dialogue, much less dialogue delivery
(2) the music; take for example the beginning to AOTC with the Queen's ship getting destroyed - shouldn't that have been more dramatic, as Padme almost died?  Speaking of which, is there any way this could be altered in a way to make it more dramatic?  Maybe showing the senate getting destroyed (not just a bomb in a floating seat, but the building being entirely destroyed.  Or maybe show multiple senators being "hit", so everyone in the senate is afraid for their lives - imagine the UN building being destroyed or the reps being killed one-by-one and what would happen...)

         

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That kamino shot looks much improved.

 

Sometimes not showing the whole city in an establishing shot helps add size to the thing.

 

Lucas should've pulled a Kubrick AI and shot Kamino on oil rigs in the north atlantic. :p

 

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JediMasterFisher said:
Monroville said:
sketchrob said:

Heres a quick mockup to convey what I was saying earlier...

 

That's it!  Looks MUCH better than the original.  I also love the spotlights emitting from the cities as well.

 

I agree much nicer! 

 

 

 Only one thing... Obi-Wan is hanging under the city...

And in the time of greatest despair, there shall come a savior, and he shall be known as the Son of the Suns.

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Bingowings said:
SomethingStarWarsRelated said:
Bingowings said:

IG-88 and 4-LOM would beg to differ with you on that one SSWR ;-)

 

 Wait...what?

Lucas pulled the old 'let's just talk about it and not show it' gag. The battle droids have been apart of all three movies...why shouldn't they be shown shutting down? It's kind of momentous occasion right?

I was writing in response to your comment -

That dialouge from Palps explains why there are no battle droids in the OT but it goes by so quickly...I think it's important to show.

It doesn't chime with the evidence:

4-LOM

IG-88

 

Aahhhhh....now I see. :D

I *do* really like this...much better. It's funny because I never really had a problem with the city so much as I did the fake CGI sea and clouds.

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Regardless, HOW anyone goes about this is going to be DIFFICULT to say the least to make any edit so the OT payoffs are still a surprise. 

The only way I know to do this is change the episode numbers. Make the prequels numbered after the OT.... Then just use voice overs from Obi-wan from OT to intro the prequels... If you do that with all the other changes you would like to make then you don't have to conceal Anakin's identity.

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if i was ever to make a full saga wide edit, i would make it 5 films, starting with a heavily editted AOTC, a heavily editted sith, then a tweaked OT. just thought id let people know.:P

 

i think the reborn project was the only ever way to make the secrets work well, alternatively watching the movies I, IV, II, V, III, VI also works well.

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Yeah, someone needs to work on that synth ocean. I wonder if Master and Commander's storm footage might be useful at all? They did capture a lot of filmed footage of a storm they incorporated into the film.

Some of that stuff might be useful for Kamino.

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If my linear idea for Episode One played out there wouldn't be much need for the Gungan City (perhaps with some colour alteration, that could be Kamino under the waterline).