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Monroville
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The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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Date created
7-May-2009, 5:07 PM
adywan said:

Why does GL suddenly think so many things need so much explanation? The "bring my shuttle" line explains how he got from bespin to the Executor so do we need to see the shuttle waiting for him or his journey to the executor, No?

If you apply this (leaving more movie elements for the audience to figure out as opposed to showing every bloody thing) to the PT:Rs (when you get to them) this alone should edit a good 20 minutes or more out of a lot of them.

There is also the issue with:
(1) dialogue, much less dialogue delivery
(2) the music; take for example the beginning to AOTC with the Queen's ship getting destroyed - shouldn't that have been more dramatic, as Padme almost died?  Speaking of which, is there any way this could be altered in a way to make it more dramatic?  Maybe showing the senate getting destroyed (not just a bomb in a floating seat, but the building being entirely destroyed.  Or maybe show multiple senators being "hit", so everyone in the senate is afraid for their lives - imagine the UN building being destroyed or the reps being killed one-by-one and what would happen...)