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ben_danger said:

i would agree on having them meet on dagoba, far more simple, plus i can imagine a really nice matte of the blockade runner and naboo ship facing each other, its almost like a 'passing the torch shot'.

 

the tantive IV is far more interesting visally than the naboo craft in my eyes, so i would prefer to see it entering the clouds, but it may make more sense to be following the naboo craft and have the tantive IV there waiting.

 

something to add to the PT:R request list would be have the tantive IV changed to match the OT colours, but its not vital.

 

SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

Oh! ben_danger, I think the close up of the button pushing is a great start to making these movies FEEL like the OT. Yes, of course, it's Luke's hand, but I think you're suggesting we FILM hands pushing buttons and whatnot...right?

 

right!;)

 

I thought I should let you all know that I've started a very rough edit of these few scenes. The question I have is: If the tantive does indeed have this medical station onboard WHY do they need to land on dagobah? Earlier in the film Obiwan meets up with Bail and Yoda somewhere in space...why not just do that again? One solution I've come up with is that the droid tells them something like: "We need to land somewhere nearby to make a safe delivery." I don't know...what do you guys think?

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ben_danger said:

i would agree on having them meet on dagoba, far more simple, plus i can imagine a really nice matte of the blockade runner and naboo ship facing each other, its almost like a 'passing the torch shot'.

 

the tantive IV is far more interesting visally than the naboo craft in my eyes, so i would prefer to see it entering the clouds, but it may make more sense to be following the naboo craft and have the tantive IV there waiting.

 

something to add to the PT:R request list would be have the tantive IV changed to match the OT colours, but its not vital.

 

SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

Oh! ben_danger, I think the close up of the button pushing is a great start to making these movies FEEL like the OT. Yes, of course, it's Luke's hand, but I think you're suggesting we FILM hands pushing buttons and whatnot...right?

 

right!;)

 

I thought I should let you all know that I've started a very rough edit of these few scenes. The question I have is: If the tantive does indeed have this medical station onboard WHY do they need to land on dagobah? Earlier in the film Obiwan meets up with Bail and Yoda somewhere in space...why not just do that again? One solution I've come up with is that the droid tells them something like: "We need to land somewhere nearby to make a safe delivery." I don't know...what do you guys think?

 

 

I never liked how Yoda gave up so quickly fighting Palpatine 

move the "Into exile I must go!" line to later on and this might help as a transition from them being in space to being on Dagobah 

 

(crap 18.00) I wont be able to say any more till tomorrow (damn iPhone not letting me post on here)

 

let me know what you think SSWR

 

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ben_danger said:

i would agree on having them meet on dagoba, far more simple, plus i can imagine a really nice matte of the blockade runner and naboo ship facing each other, its almost like a 'passing the torch shot'.

 

the tantive IV is far more interesting visally than the naboo craft in my eyes, so i would prefer to see it entering the clouds, but it may make more sense to be following the naboo craft and have the tantive IV there waiting.

 

something to add to the PT:R request list would be have the tantive IV changed to match the OT colours, but its not vital.

 

SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

Oh! ben_danger, I think the close up of the button pushing is a great start to making these movies FEEL like the OT. Yes, of course, it's Luke's hand, but I think you're suggesting we FILM hands pushing buttons and whatnot...right?

 

right!;)

 

I thought I should let you all know that I've started a very rough edit of these few scenes. The question I have is: If the tantive does indeed have this medical station onboard WHY do they need to land on dagobah? Earlier in the film Obiwan meets up with Bail and Yoda somewhere in space...why not just do that again? One solution I've come up with is that the droid tells them something like: "We need to land somewhere nearby to make a safe delivery." I don't know...what do you guys think?

 

 

I never liked how Yoda gave up so quickly fighting Palpatine 

move the "Into exile I must go!" line to later on and this might help as a transition from them being in space to being on Dagobah 

 

(crap 18.00) I wont be able to say any more till tomorrow (damn iPhone not letting me post on here)

 

let me know what you think SSWR

 

 

 It's funny because the other day I was playing with the Yoda escape scene and I cut the Yoda line completely. This, again, is another lets-spell-it-out-for-the-audience piece of dialouge. We *know* he failed. And why tell us he must go into exile when it would be much more interesting for us as the audience to wonder where he is up until ESB.

So are you suggesting that when Obiwan meets up with Yoda and Bail the *first* time in ROTS that it *not* be somewhere in space but actually be on dagobah? Because THAT could work...

So it could be like:

Obi: my clones turned on me...

Bail: we're sending you our coordinates...

-wipe to dagobah with Obiwan landing and continue with scene on board the tantive

-continue movie as is until we leave mustafar

-no asteroid planet thingy. instead yoda and bail are back at dagobah hiding and waiting for obiwan

Bail: we'll take her to the medical station...

-medical station is now on board the tantive...which is on dagobah

Hmm?

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SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

So it could be like:

Obi: my clones turned on me...

Bail: we're sending you our coordinates...

-wipe to dagobah with Obiwan landing and continue with scene on board the tantive

-continue movie as is until we leave mustafar

-no asteroid planet thingy. instead yoda and bail are back at dagobah hiding and waiting for obiwan

Bail: we'll take her to the medical station...

-medical station is now on board the tantive...which is on dagobah

Hmm?

 

Sounds good to me!

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The medical centre is small enough to be on a ship (though a slight colour correction could make it tie in with Tantive designs).

It's a shame we can't lose the creepy midwife droids.

Vader is born out of technology but the children should have been born with human help to make the contrast more complete (perhaps Lucas was trying to make out that technology isn't good or evil, how it's used makes the difference, but it kind of back-fired for me in that scene).

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Bingowings said:

The medical centre is small enough to be on a ship (though a slight colour correction could make it tie in with Tantive designs).

If that, then when we see the hall, a new matte should be made, similar to tantive's.

I expect to see Nostromo like interior... :D


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ben_danger said:

i would agree on having them meet on dagoba, far more simple, plus i can imagine a really nice matte of the blockade runner and naboo ship facing each other, its almost like a 'passing the torch shot'.

 

the tantive IV is far more interesting visally than the naboo craft in my eyes, so i would prefer to see it entering the clouds, but it may make more sense to be following the naboo craft and have the tantive IV there waiting.

 

something to add to the PT:R request list would be have the tantive IV changed to match the OT colours, but its not vital.

 

SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

Oh! ben_danger, I think the close up of the button pushing is a great start to making these movies FEEL like the OT. Yes, of course, it's Luke's hand, but I think you're suggesting we FILM hands pushing buttons and whatnot...right?

 

right!;)

 

I thought I should let you all know that I've started a very rough edit of these few scenes. The question I have is: If the tantive does indeed have this medical station onboard WHY do they need to land on dagobah? Earlier in the film Obiwan meets up with Bail and Yoda somewhere in space...why not just do that again? One solution I've come up with is that the droid tells them something like: "We need to land somewhere nearby to make a safe delivery." I don't know...what do you guys think?

 

 

I never liked how Yoda gave up so quickly fighting Palpatine

move the "Into exile I must go!" line to later on and this might help as a transition from them being in space to being on Dagobah

 

(crap 18.00) I wont be able to say any more till tomorrow (damn iPhone not letting me post on here)

 

let me know what you think SSWR

 

 

It's funny because the other day I was playing with the Yoda escape scene and I cut the Yoda line completely. This, again, is another lets-spell-it-out-for-the-audience piece of dialouge. We *know* he failed. And why tell us he must go into exile when it would be much more interesting for us as the audience to wonder where he is up until ESB.

So are you suggesting that when Obiwan meets up with Yoda and Bail the *first* time in ROTS that it *not* be somewhere in space but actually be on dagobah? Because THAT could work...

So it could be like:

Obi: my clones turned on me...

Bail: we're sending you our coordinates...

-wipe to dagobah with Obiwan landing and continue with scene on board the tantive

-continue movie as is until we leave mustafar

-no asteroid planet thingy. instead yoda and bail are back at dagobah hiding and waiting for obiwan

Bail: we'll take her to the medical station...

-medical station is now on board the tantive...which is on dagobah

Hmm?

 

that sounds much better, perhaps a throw away line could be made from yoda, though im not sure if it is necessary, just like 'this place is hidden from the force' or something as such to explain why they are there. the claustrophobic atmosphere of the planet should be enough to show that they are hiding. i can't stop thinking about mattes of having headlights illuminating the scarily dark planet.

i definitely agree on having yoda not mention the exile buisness. having obi wan, bail (and padme, corpse or uncorpse) going their seperate ways, will hopefully force a 'loose end' that will get tied up in ESB. it makes yodas insane chatter seem so much more dark now, thinking he has just been losing it in lonliness for 20 years!

how hard would it be i wonder to remove padme from the table? it would be cool to have her give birth outside, though a logical reason would be hard to grasp. i really like the idea of 'it is too dangerous to deliver the babies in space' dialogue.

 

cant wait to see the next installment of SSWR. for the record i still cant stop thinking of the bugs life clip, my girlfriend keeps on chanting it whenever it appears in the films!:P

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vaderios said:
ben_danger said:

i may have read this wrong, but did you do that colour correction in photoshop??

 

Yes!

 

@Bingo: Where is the rain mockups?

 

-Angel

 

forgot to ask. HOW? can you import film into photoshop? this would be really good for me to know!:D

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Very nice, Bingo. Some of your best yet, I think.

And hey, it's another ship landing scene! :p

That would be funny. I hope someone (Davnes?!) will actually do it.

The idea of Tentative IV landing on Dagobah, etc. sounds interesting.

I'm working on a little something, and I had better make it good, because I'm going up north for a week to see family.

 

Well...I made a very rough cut of the landing on Dagobah.....but I can't do more work on it right now. :(

The first couple of minutes has the main landing, etc.. The next couple of minutes has a few interesting edits, and the rest is just to make it a 10 minute video. ;)

I'll probably work it some more after I get back...unless someone makes a better version. 

Anyway, at least try to enjoy it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fXbDSoXYo4

 

See ya'll in a week!

 

 

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oooh! new CG!:D very cool clip davnes! i liked the mustafar cut, an interesting idea, certainly adds some mystery to the events.

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could well work. makes it more interesting. still some fat [plot / dialogue wise] that could be trimmed.

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SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

It's funny because the other day I was playing with the Yoda escape scene and I cut the Yoda line completely. This, again, is another lets-spell-it-out-for-the-audience piece of dialouge. We *know* he failed. And why tell us he must go into exile when it would be much more interesting for us as the audience to wonder where he is up until ESB.

So are you suggesting that when Obiwan meets up with Yoda and Bail the *first* time in ROTS that it *not* be somewhere in space but actually be on dagobah? Because THAT could work...

So it could be like:

Obi: my clones turned on me...

Bail: we're sending you our coordinates...

-wipe to dagobah with Obiwan landing and continue with scene on board the tantive

-continue movie as is until we leave mustafar

-no asteroid planet thingy. instead yoda and bail are back at dagobah hiding and waiting for obiwan

Bail: we'll take her to the medical station...

-medical station is now on board the tantive...which is on dagobah

Hmm?

 

that sounds much better, perhaps a throw away line could be made from yoda, though im not sure if it is necessary, just like 'this place is hidden from the force' or something as such to explain why they are there. the claustrophobic atmosphere of the planet should be enough to show that they are hiding. i can't stop thinking about mattes of having headlights illuminating the scarily dark planet.

i definitely agree on having yoda not mention the exile buisness. having obi wan, bail (and padme, corpse or uncorpse) going their seperate ways, will hopefully force a 'loose end' that will get tied up in ESB. it makes yodas insane chatter seem so much more dark now, thinking he has just been losing it in lonliness for 20 years!

how hard would it be i wonder to remove padme from the table? it would be cool to have her give birth outside, though a logical reason would be hard to grasp. i really like the idea of 'it is too dangerous to deliver the babies in space' dialogue.

 

cant wait to see the next installment of SSWR. for the record i still cant stop thinking of the bugs life clip, my girlfriend keeps on chanting it whenever it appears in the films!:P

I vote against the "it is too dangerous to have the babies in space" line: it's ridiculous (a society so advanced but they can't afford to have a baby in space? come on), it's exposition instead of just doing it, and it would obviously be there just to make sure they land on Dagobah just to tie it in with the OT.  Like too many things in the PT already.  I love the landing/meeting on Dagobah idea, and really really like the way SSWR mentioned it, with Dagobah kind of existing as a "Force-cloaked" hideaway for them after Order 66 and everything goes to crap.

Davnes, that's a good mockup for translating the same basic beats as the original film to Dagobah.  However, if we/you are radically reduxing (ha) the Prequels, then is it an intention to try to preserve the revelations of the OT (Vader is Luke's father and Leia = sister) as much a surprise as possible?  That's always been on my wishlist for every prequel fanedit, that it would create a version that I could watch with my (hypothetical) kids who had never seen Star Wars before, in numerical order, and they would feel as gutpunched as I did when I first heard "No, Luke, I am your father."  

It would be epic if we could keep the Vader name from ever being applied (onscreen) to Anakin, and made it look like Vader was actually another Jedi Palpatine had turned either in the years between Ep.III and IV, or even before he took Anakin as an apprentice, with Anakin just another puppet to destabilize the galaxy or somesuch.  I know I'm grasping at straws here, just kind of spitballing ideas, seeing what sticks to the wall, you know, but the point is to set up the end of ROTS in some fashion that indicates that Vader is not Anakin, and that Anakin did indeed die on Mustafar as Obi-Wan expected him too.  He probably wouldn't have even made the connection himself until facing Vader later (whether during the in between period or at the final confrontation on the Death Star).  The EU (and I'm not sure how much this radical redux would draw from it) has definately established that there were plenty of Dark Jedi helping out the Emperor, even beyond the "only two Sith" rule.  

Also, the last ten minutes of ROTS, with it's frantic scramble to tie up as many loose ends as lamely and obviously as possible (not to mention furthering GL's landing platform fetish) absolutely grates on my nerves all the time now.  Just leave some ends loose, George!  We love to speculate!

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Davnes, that's a good mockup for translating the same basic beats as the original film to Dagobah.  However, if we/you are radically reduxing (ha) the Prequels, then is it an intention to try to preserve the revelations of the OT (Vader is Luke's father and Leia = sister) as much a surprise as possible?  ...

It would be epic if we could keep the Vader name from ever being applied (onscreen) to Anakin, and made it look like Vader was actually another Jedi Palpatine had turned either in the years between Ep.III and IV, or even before he took Anakin as an apprentice, with Anakin just another puppet to destabilize the galaxy or somesuch.  ....the point is to set up the end of ROTS in some fashion that indicates that Vader is not Anakin, and that Anakin did indeed die on Mustafar as Obi-Wan expected him too.

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One thing that could be done is to just show Palpatine kneeling next to Ani after he got Bar-B-Q'ed, and then cut out the 'surgery' scene, (and of course cut-out/dub-over/edit any mention of Ani being Vader). Then, when we see Vader on the [Star Destroyer], we're left wondering "Who's that guy in the black suit next to Uncle Palpy?".

Anyway, the main focus of the video I did was on the Dagobah idea...the other little edits (ie: any mention of sweet Padme dying, etc.) were a secondary concern.

But...it'll all have to wait 'til next week. Happy Mother's Day everybody!

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I thought I should let you all know that I've started a very rough edit of these few scenes. The question I have is: If the tantive does indeed have this medical station onboard WHY do they need to land on dagobah? Earlier in the film Obiwan meets up with Bail and Yoda somewhere in space...why not just do that again? One solution I've come up with is that the droid tells them something like: "We need to land somewhere nearby to make a safe delivery." I don't know...what do you guys think?

Here is a possibility:
maybe Dagobah is Yoda's home and there is something there that gives him greater Force strength, which allows him to heal from his battle with Palpatine.  You could also explain the landing as Yoda needs to use the Force to try and save a critically injured Padme (if not by Anakin then something added to said fan edit) and it is only through Yoda and the Force that the children are saved.

You can also make it that they are on the run, and Dagobah is out of the way enough to deal with Padme's medical attention and Yoda's as well.

 

         

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Monroville said:

Here is a possibility:
maybe Dagobah is Yoda's home and there is something there that gives him greater Force strength, which allows him to heal from his battle with Palpatine.  You could also explain the landing as Yoda needs to use the Force to try and save a critically injured Padme (if not by Anakin then something added to said fan edit) and it is only through Yoda and the Force that the children are saved.

Padme can suffer from poison that breath gas in mustafar. The same shit that Anakin could do but he saved. Obi too can survive with force heal, padme not


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This would be REALLY hard, as Ben Kenobi tells Luke that Vader killed Anakin when in ROTS it is obviously Ben doing the smiting.  Granted, you can cut out the Vader suit reveal and the last we see of Anakin is as the smouldering heap on the lava planet, but even then, as soon as Ben tells Luke the story in ANH, the kids will begin the figure it out (though i would still prefer an edit of this nature).

The only other thing I can think of is have another character fight Anakin at the end, and that would require some HEAVY FX work to rotoscope someone's face onto Ewan's and/or some heavy editing.  Then you would have to develop said character so they just don't pop up for the one fight, or make it someone we've seen before (Mace Windu doesn't die in the Emperor fight and you don't have Anakin chop off his hands, which would allow him to face him one on one - could have him get hit multiple times and maybe die beside Anakin)... in other words, it would be complicated.  Thanks George.

On a side note, I would delete the "Anakin choking Padme" scene; makes NO sense if everything he is doing is because he LOVES her.

         

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Monroville said:

This would be REALLY hard, as Ben Kenobi tells Luke that Vader killed Anakin when in ROTS it is obviously Ben doing the smiting.  Granted, you can cut out the Vader suit reveal and the last we see of Anakin is as the smouldering heap on the lava planet, but even then, as soon as Ben tells Luke the story in ANH, the kids will begin the figure it out (though i would still prefer an edit of this nature).

The only other thing I can think of is have another character fight Anakin at the end, and that would require some HEAVY FX work to rotoscope someone's face onto Ewan's and/or some heavy editing.  Then you would have to develop said character so they just don't pop up for the one fight, or make it someone we've seen before (Mace Windu doesn't die in the Emperor fight and you don't have Anakin chop off his hands, which would allow him to face him one on one - could have him get hit multiple times and maybe die beside Anakin)... in other words, it would be complicated.  Thanks George.

On a side note, I would delete the "Anakin choking Padme" scene; makes NO sense if everything he is doing is because he LOVES her.

Well. obi killed vader because there was no more anakin. But like Confusedmathew said, a man that was left dismembered and on fire on a volcanic planet should not be so calm in ANH. So like ady said the PT should follow OT anakin has to have a different death and obi be less sadist.

 

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wow! that looks awesome! how do you edit film in photoshop? what frmat does it need to be?:)

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Photoshop always :D

I just drag and drop it. i use Cs3. For some weird reason Cs4 dont support or whatever.

I import .mov files


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Great work as always, but there was something about it that just looked dead to me, especially the droid talking to them, liven him up a little (colour wise) & ya have it nailed IMO

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Great work as always, but there was something about it that just looked dead to me, especially the droid talking to them, liven him up a little (colour wise) & ya have it nailed IMO

 

this is the pallete is use:

Now i see that its a bit greenish, my bad

Here is the revisited :P  :

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Again it looks great but R2 & 3Po are quite washed out in that screen grab

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To be honest it always bothered me that there was so many men stood outside a glass wall watching her give birth.

Have they no decency, give the poor girl some privacy for Jebus' sake!

so much for a more civilized age!! LOL

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BarBar Jinkx said:

To be honest it always bothered me that there was so many men stood outside a glass wall watching her give birth.

Have they no decency, give the poor girl some privacy for Jebus' sake!

so much for a more civilized age!! LOL

Its possible to blur the windows.


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