could well work. makes it more interesting. still some fat [plot / dialogue wise] that could be trimmed.
Post #358490
- Author
- Johnny Ringo
- Parent topic
- The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/358490/action/topic#358490
- Date created
- 5-May-2009, 11:13 PM