vaderios said:
You dont have to show that the ship is going to land in the dagobah.

Show it ender to the atmosphere like Bingo's mockups and then have a matte with maybe some elements. Besides Landing isnt nessesary becasause the action has to be quick with fast pacing.

In fact the scene can be similar to ROTJ when the rebels have jus landed to endor and we see the shuttle in the distance.

Also raining is a good mood (ESB like) so we can have some slight rain sound out of the windows and when padme dies some thunder sounded.

-Angel

I added some lightning and rain to the landing shots if you scroll back a bit (adds a bit of atmosphere to an otherwise dull mockup).