ben_danger said:
ooooh, really cool ideas SSWR. it makes great use of dialogue that is usually cut. i especially liked the lift part.

been thinking of a few ideas for an AOTC edit, trying to orientate it to a noir detective story that phases into the pulp jungle (indiana jones) ending. maybe we could bounce some of them around a bit to see if theyd work?

two key ideas are:

either an opening or early on in the film, BEFORE padmes attack, there are a series of assassinations on senators, maybe a characteristic bomb is seen? a cool scene, would be the deleted scene of padme addressing the senate, only for a bomb to interrupt her which kills some more senators. this would hopefully make her seem in more danger. im guessing the assassination attempt upon her would have to be viewed before the senate bomb.

obi wan doesnt discover the clones, they are not clones of jango. he finds jango somewhere else perhaps, and follows hm to geonosis. maybe the jedi start to question why the seperatists are trying to assassinate the only senators who are against the creation of the clone army. the clone army isnt a secret, and is perhaps a small experimental program, that needs the go ahead for full production

a possible alternative opening? maybe something to do with the seperatists, or the clones.

I'm liking these ideas, ben_danger. I'm not sure how you would rearrange the whole Jango/clone plot but it's worth discussing. I really do like the idea of more senators deaths. A bomb in the deleted senate scene could maybe work...I also like the idea of empty pods in that scene as well...showing that there have been others leaving the crumbling republic. (I forget who originally suggested this)

An alternate opening? That might be cool...I think it would still have to be similar in style...just like all of the other movies...

Thanks for the feedback too! :D