Thought this video might stir up a few things ;)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AhIsXqzs_14
It's rough but what do ya think?
-Tried making Anakin a likeable guy.
-I've removed the first part of the Palpy office scene thinking (*IF* it should even be used) it could be moved to later in the film.
-Oh! And why the hell does Palpy have to be behind EVERY plot point?! I've removed any sort of reference to that.
-I still don't know what to do with the Jedi and Padme conversation...