Davnes007, like everyone else, I think you did a great job on that clip. How you managed to whip that up in one night I don't know. With some of the refinements mentioned (i.e., smaller text, different colouring, juggling the placement of the images and text, etc.) it could work.

However, for the purposes of ESB:R, I'm not sure it'd be a good addition. Although pop-up HUD displays look OK in the PT ships, I ultimately think it would be out of place in the Falcon, whose instrumentation is very rudimentary and consists of physical parts (buttons, switches, etc.), just like all the other ships in the OT.

That said, again, it is a very interesting and well-executed concept. Who knows, maybe with some adjustments it would fit.