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Bingowings said:

Personally I don't think the scene needs it but the mockup idea could be done by having Han looking at the planet and Leia reading the small print, something like (but as always better) this :

Lando system?

 

 But then as the scene plays out, wouldn't it appear that Han never reads the information on display? It would be like he has an amazing ability to recognize the dozen systems found near Hoth just by glancing at the globes, while Leia is reading.

Or am I looking into it too much?? Ha!

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i like the globe idea. if there was colour added, the light on their faces could change also as the flick through different systems.

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Davnes007 said:

This was the start of an idea that came to me in a vision.

What's Your Next Move

Well...here it is. I stayed up all night working on it, so watch it as many times as you can, and enjoy the epic'ness. :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijc5qK3QX9s

EDIT: I know that the text should be backwards, but I was too tired to go through the trouble of making it backwards, sorry.

...now...I have to get some sleep.................................

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nice!!

Bingowings said: Do you want to see the project finished as a playable film or a flick book?

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wow, that is really really awesome! is there any way though that you could make one without the green text? i love the input of the gas mining station then cloud city. works fantastically!

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Beautiful Davnes!  I'm not sure the eyelines are perfect yet, but its an excellent concept.  I think with smaller text in Aurebesh to keep it less of a distraction (love the "info" you put in, LOL), it would work well.  I'm sure someone will want to use it, if not Ady.

Great work!  Well worth the loss of sleep!

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Davnes007 said:
Davnes007 said:

This was the start of an idea that came to me in a vision.

What's Your Next Move

Well...here it is. I stayed up all night working on it, so watch it as many times as you can, and enjoy the epic'ness. :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijc5qK3QX9s

EDIT: I know that the text should be backwards, but I was too tired to go through the trouble of making it backwards, sorry.

...now...I have to get some sleep.................................

That's so blooming brilliant! fingers crossed that Ady does something like this?

 

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Okay, this is my first post here so be kind...

Ady, i'm a massive fan of your edit, despite my DVD-5 cutting out just before the Death Star assualt! It's amazing how one man can do what Lucas and his crew have failed at again and again...

Anyway, what do you guys think of this Vader holo upgrade?

 

Obviously the perpsective could be better...

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Not bad, but every needs to remember that it needs to be a video from the right angle.  A fuzzy static picture of Vader does not come close to replacing the holo shot, no matter how bad it was originally.

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Congratulations for the work!
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And the fact Vaders airing his gentlemens area is a bit suggestive.

Welcome to the boards Corps.Natty, its always great to see new visuals in this thread.

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It doesn't have to be a full body shot why not try the head & shoulder approach 

Bingowings said: Do you want to see the project finished as a playable film or a flick book?

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Davnes007 said:
Davnes007 said:

This was the start of an idea that came to me in a vision.

What's Your Next Move

Well...here it is. I stayed up all night working on it, so watch it as many times as you can, and enjoy the epic'ness. :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijc5qK3QX9s

EDIT: I know that the text should be backwards, but I was too tired to go through the trouble of making it backwards, sorry.

...now...I have to get some sleep.................................


Whilst that does risk being a superfluous change, it does look frickin' awesome. I'd love to something like that in Ady's cut if only for the cool factor.

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BarBar Jinkx said:

It doesn't have to be a full body shot why not try the head & shoulder approach 

 

There aint no way that Vader would suffer from dandruff!

As i recall, all holograms thoughout the saga have been full body shots though.

Really good work on that clip Davnes007

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Darth Solo said:
BarBar Jinkx said:

It doesn't have to be a full body shot why not try the head & shoulder approach 

 

There aint no way that Vader would suffer from dandruff!

As i recall, all holograms thoughout the saga have been full body shots though.

Really good work on that clip Davnes007

First - HAHA Like I didn't see that one coming ;-)

& Second - el Sid used the shoulders up approach 

 

Bingowings said: Do you want to see the project finished as a playable film or a flick book?

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RoccondilRinon said:

Nice work Davnes007, but the way I see it, the hologram distracts us from the actors and the exposition a lot more than a couple of 3-second cutaways would.

 

 I still have to agree on this here. It makes the viewer want to focus on the hologram, rather than on Han and Leia.

If only a hi-res dashboard image were available... *sigh*

That is impressive though, I have to admit!

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I have to say, I was sceptical about including a cut-away shot to a view-screen or even having a hologram pop up in that scene, as I was thinking that it may be too distracting. But davnes' video mock-up has really changed my mind on this - it is tastefully done (really liked the cloud-city and the mining-platform holographic images popping up when they were mentioned in the conversation), already looks good (and could potentially look better with certain refinements; perhaps adjusting its position, etc), and is surprisingly subtle (it looks as if that holoram has always been there, what with Han and Leia reading the text, and it popping on and off perfectly in time with Han's switch-flipping; when I compared it to the original scene, I actually missed it!).

And I definitely don't see it as a distraction - if needs be, the hologram could be made slightly smaller, or else slightly fainter, to be better placed in the scene.

But great stuff! Here's hoping that something like this makes it into ESB:R.

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what if we had a cutaway AND a hologram.

 

the cutaway could show a little panel with text on which would be what their eyeline is focused on perhaps

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I really like the blue spinning globes for the Falcon cockpit scene, but the green texts and outline were a bit "heavy" and destracting. Maybe slower rotating planet holos and smaller, more subtle blue-ish text (similar in hue to the lighting in Han and Leia's faces) might be better and less distracting from the actors.

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Davnes007 said:
Davnes007 said:

This was the start of an idea that came to me in a vision.

What's Your Next Move

Well...here it is. I stayed up all night working on it, so watch it as many times as you can, and enjoy the epic'ness. :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijc5qK3QX9s

EDIT: I know that the text should be backwards, but I was too tired to go through the trouble of making it backwards, sorry.

...now...I have to get some sleep.................................

 

I was skeptical at first, but I love that! I hope Ady does it! Thanks for working so hard on it!

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BarBar Jinkx said:
Davnes007 said:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijc5qK3QX9s

one small change is needed

reverse what they are looking at, have Han look at the text & leia at the graphic, as han is the one giving out the facts.

 

Bingowings said: Do you want to see the project finished as a playable film or a flick book?

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Davnes007 said:  

Well...here it is. I stayed up all night working on it, so watch it as many times as you can, and enjoy the epic'ness. :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijc5qK3QX9s

EDIT: I know that the text should be backwards, but I was too tired to go through the trouble of making it backwards, sorry.

...now...I have to get some sleep.................................

 

Very nice! Subtle and not too flashy. I would maybe remove the box around the text though.

And of course, it's great to see Engli-Besh get some love!

You know of the rebellion against the Empire?

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Davnes007 said:
Davnes007 said:

This was the start of an idea that came to me in a vision.

Well...here it is. I stayed up all night working on it, so watch it as many times as you can, and enjoy the epic'ness. :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijc5qK3QX9s

EDIT: I know that the text should be backwards, but I was too tired to go through the trouble of making it backwards, sorry.

...now...I have to get some sleep.................................

This is a neat idea...

 

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