Davnes007, don't worry about perfection when it comes to storyboards. What matters with them is the sense of story and overall pacing.
Great job.
edit:
I know imperial paintjobs have been discussed before, but what about giving Palp's shuttle a dark maroon color?
And I've always wondered why the heroes dont fly a parts shuttle instead of the same old type we always see. Would be better if it was distinct some way.