I think the first paragraph needs to be longer - it just looks ... weird as one short sentence.
But I really like where it's going so far.
Post #354815
- Author
- ChainsawAsh
- Parent topic
- The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/354815/action/topic#354815
- Date created
- 15-Apr-2009, 6:20 PM