@ Ripplin: don't worry... no "gingerly" in this edit! :P

@ guitarfan01: you're right about Sturm. The error was in the original and I haven't noticed it. I'll post a new version with the correction.

About the Luke Mara duel: I've tried to keep the psychological duel between them... but with the Force present Luke is not keep hostage by Mara, and in some way he have to try to recover his saber... and Mara could not be pleased! :D

But if you have some suggestion for improving it... are well accepted!

@ Xammer: my error! I'll correct it ASAP.