Ok, I corrected the title crawl by syncing it with Adywan's Revisted crawl - it's not 100% exactly like his crawl, but it's pretty darn close and should be much closer to the soundtrack cues than the previous versions.
Will start on the rewrites and spelling corrections for the EP2 and EP3 crawls (only change to the EP1 crawl was that I rewrote "the greedy Trade Federation" line to "the corrupt Trade Federation" instead).