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Post #353058

Author
Asteroid-Man
Parent topic
Star Wars: Renascent *** NOW AVAILABLE!!! ***
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Date created
7-Apr-2009, 9:04 AM
RoccondilRinon said:
Asteroid-Man said:

Oh yeah that's in Arial Bold and I'm keeping that. I want that to be bland because that's not the highlight of the Logo. Thanks for your edit of the credits. There's also another one that opens to "Present" scenes (ANH) also in the first post in Italic.

I'm not objecting to bland. Arial is not merely bland, it is ugly. I beg you, use Helvetica. It's just as plain, but it's not ugly. As you can see, Arial did call my attention to itself. You might not be able to see much difference, but to someone who knows a lot about design and especially typography, it is all the difference in the world.

Okay, the second crawl needs a bit of work. The way I see it, what's wrong with using the original (or most of it) word for word? At a minimum, there are two typos that need seeing to: its, not it's; and ensure, not unsure.

 

 Haha wow, I made a lot of mistakes with those titles! I'll see if I still have the originally un-rendered logo, but if I don't it'll have to stay Arial.