InfoDroid said:
Good job, Asteroid-Man! I love your logo...LOVE the music...I like the direction you're going with the crawl. It feels a lot like Gladiator (which I love) and works perfectly with the new music. The mood you've created is great.

The typos that others have pointed out should be corrected, of course. And ditch the Star Wars logo you have. It's weird. Go here and download this font and install it: http://www.abstractfonts.com/font/10476

Shift + S gives you a perfect Star Wars logo. :)

The only other thing I'd say is that you have a little music bleed-through from the original track which (as I've found) is unavoidable unless you scrap the soundtrack completely and create your own soundtrack with your own effects from the bottom-up. Which I'm sure you're not going to want to do. But, other than that, I'd say great start! Thanks for posting the clip! It helps to see what kind of quality to expect. Keep it up!

--ID

Thanks Info! I'm glad to hear I have your approval! I was aiming for a Gladiator approach with the opening titles.

Thanks for the link. I just installed it. Sadly though I won't be able to get much more done for a while. Regardless folks, don't forget I'm aiming for December 25th! (Last Friday of the Year and Christmas) So I have time, but I'm aiming for Summer so then I can get to the DVD.

I thought I had isolated the music bleed. That's odd, are you sure it's not just the music I put in? If you could tell me at which point I can try and isolate it some more. Thanks for the feedback info. I was actually gonna ask that if you have msn or skype if we could do a voice chat discussing this edit? PM me.