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Post #352985

Author
RoccondilRinon
Parent topic
Star Wars: Renascent *** NOW AVAILABLE!!! ***
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Date created
6-Apr-2009, 7:54 PM

Two major comments. I like the style you're going for, but there are two things I have to say.

1. The font you use in your logo. Arial? Kill it. Anywhere you can use Arial, Helvetica does a better job. If you don't have it, I do.

2. The wording of the opening slides needs work; it reads quite clumsily. If you like, I can give them a slight rewrite to show you what I mean.