FINAL SCENE WITH REBEL FLEET:
clips seen here and here:
Whether the galaxy shots are changed to something else (to show the fleet hiding in a nebula or around a black hole, etc), the galaxy is modified with a better looking one or you bring the galaxy closer so we can see the spiral arms in the other fleet shots, is there any way to maybe make the fleet bigger as well as work on some of the ships?
If not add new designs or slightly mod the ones we currently see (like maybe make the "neck" on the frigate Luke and Co. are on a bit thicker, as it seems rather flimsy and an easy way to get the ship destroyed), I say the flight paths of the ships could definitely use some work. Watch the second clip and look at how the frigate is moving in comparison with the other ships - is it just me or does that look a little awkward?
Maybe you could just change the transport on the lower left to point to the left from the get-go so it doesn't look like it's about to ram the frigate... and could we make the frigate engines orange or blue too?
Also, at 7:01, would it be conceivable to make the docking arm thicker or move it to where the portal Lando went out to get Luke on Bespin?
And could we open a button or two on Lando's shirt (at 7:04)? I'm not gay or anything but he looks like a dork with the shirt buttoned all the way up; no self-respecting playa would wear a shirt like that.
Watching the end, I thought of a possible problem with this and JEDI: if Chewbacca is with Lando, how does he get captured by Boussch/Leia? Wouldn't Lando have played the "captured Chewbacca as present" gag to get in himself, especially since Chewie was already with him?
And at 7:55, maybe the medical droid in the background could move a little bit?
BESPIN ESCAPE:
Also in the first clip, could we see the white dots of the previous escaping Bespin population ships in some of these Falcon shots (or maybe some late stragglers around the Falcon)? Again, they could be far off in the distance, since they had a head start on escaping, but just to show how massive the evacuation is (and that a whole city just cleaned out) would be rather impressive.
This shot in particular (from 0:58 to 1:04): whether we see the line of ships off in the distance as they are escaping, or have one or two in the middle/foreground of the screen heading for the clouds, which would further justify the Falcon coming from below and making the vertical U-turn behind and above the cloud line to go around said escaping ship(s)...
Also also, at 1:17, shouldn't all the lights on Bespin be off, since the city has been evacuated? Speaking of which, should there be any indication after Lando's warning of the city "shutting down" - whether we have tornado warning sirens, flashing lights, scenes of people rushing into an "airport" or "subway" (quick clips to indicate maybe a near panic of some sort - more than just people idly standing around), building lights turning off, etc.
And I guess 2:19 is where we could see the underside of the city moving by quickly right outside the portal?
And regarding the TIE laser fire: if the firing rate is different from A NEW HOPE to EMPIRE, is there any way to just make the TIES consistent in all the movies and have them fire with the same rate as in A NEW HOPE (and I still don't think 3 TIEs are enough to herd the Falcon anywhere...)?
Post #352893
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- Monroville
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- STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW
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- 6-Apr-2009, 3:23 PM