Johnny5 said:You guys shut up
Whoa, strong language.
Johnny5 said:It doesn't matter if I am a Christian.
That is exactly how everyone else feels, and that is why you have them all so ticked off with what you said. If you want to recover from this, I'd suggest just ignoring their comments and trying to pretend your first post never happened (editing your first post before your original account got banned would have helped too).
Anyway, I am sure many of us would be happy to help you out with your story, only problem is, without having read what you wrote so far, it is hard to offer any suggestions. I am sure you don't want to post your script here for the whole world to read, so if you PM it to me I'd be happy to read it and offer suggestions.