Bingowings said:
There is a lot to like here, while some people just don't like purple lightsabres, it creates the impression that before going off the rails (and Sith or not this Dooku is off the rails, he's killing Jedi when he doesn't need to, he could get into his ship with Obi-Wan and Anakin disabled with ease but goes in for the kill giving Anakin a chance to keep the duel going) Dooku held the same position on the council that Mace does.

I actually tried to rework the scene so that the reason why Dooku goes in to attack Obi-Wan is because he grab his lightsaber back using the Force, indicating that he's still continuing his fight and giving Dooku no choice, but to strike back.
(hopefully that came across to the viewer, but like a lot of fanedited scenes, it's subjective, though)

Bingowings said:
Tyrannus only gets a mention in a few scenes which perhaps Jason has snipped around already.

Yeah, I removed all mention of Tyrannus from my EP2 edit.
(so now when Obi-Wan asks Jango about Syfa-Dias, Jango says he's never heard of him and then just asks Obi-Wan if he likes his "army")