This is interesting but i would like to see Something more like a tower than a Fortress.
Also the idea the tower to be in the DeathStar ring isnt bad at all.(see Force unleashed)
Btw i have a question. In the matter how close should be the space battle as we see it from the Emperor's throne room windows, some state that the battle should be close but not so close because of the deathstar shield.The question well is how we see the tie fighters taking a fly by in the establishing shot of the Tower and not hitting the shield?
-Angel