adywan said:

You have almost got it word for word with what i will be doing with that scene. The only thing really different is this line:

-2004: We have a new enemy, (camera front view of Emperor) the young rebel who destroyed the Death Star. (camera front view of Vader from the shoulders up) I have no doubt this boy is the offspring of Anakin Skywalker. (camera front view of Emperor)

I will be changing this line to just "young Skywalker". I would have preferred it to be "Luke Skywalker" but no where in the saga does the Emperor say "Luke"

Found it from back in Febuary. In order to change "We have a new enemy, the young rebel that destroyed the Death Star. I have no doubt this boy is the offspring of Anakin Skywalker" (gracious is Ian wordy!) to "We have a new enemy: Luke Skywalker", Ady takes the "young" from rebel, and combines it with Skywalker from "Anakin Skywalker", almost completely undoing the terrible choice of Anakin not recognizing that he could have kids at all even though he's been calling him "Skywalker" all movie.