vaderios said:

I took some of planet's detail from vader's arrival to executor so the planet isn't total black. also i thought the lens flare is a bit odd.

-Angel

I like the new shot you created here. I think if a lens flare is appropriate at any point in the movie, it would be this one.

Also, a few points:
(1) in the MF cockpit shot with Leia and Chewie, maybe you could do something with the Bespin underside so it doesn't look so flat (or make the sky/clouds lighter so it stands out better)
(2) Could you do some mock-ups to show something like 8 to 12 (or more, like an entire squadron of) TIEs following after the MF (maybe one shot underneath Bespin, one in planet orbit and a third by the side of the Executor)?

In an earlier post, I suggested that, with everyone definitely aboard the MF, Vader would have pulled all the stops out to capture them. It would also help explain why the Executor couldn't lock onto the MF when it was right beside the ship (too many TIEs around it, not allowing the computer to lock on).