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Post #348506

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discostewart
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Superman by Taolar (Formally: Son of Jorel) WORKPRINT AVAILABLE
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Date created
12-Mar-2009, 8:58 PM

 

discostewart said:

Stewart says: Its tricky but i personally would put a very short version of the prison escape in.

Actually, I don't have a problem with most of the prison scenes (apart from the escape by hot air balloon, which could never be successful), if these were two separate movies.

In my version only night passes between the two parts.  It just can't make sense that Lex would have enough time to plan an escape, invent that black box, etc.

 

STEWART SAYS: Fair point, im just racking my brain how to fix this one issue cause i think every plothole can be dismissed or explained away but this one bugs me hehe. What about your idea of the audio overdub? you could take the line: "where does superman always fly?" from the prison scene and then cut to" north miss tessmarker, north". Not sure if it can be lifted though if background effects or music are in the way. U dont really need the black box just the idea that luthor has observed superman always flies one way.

Other than that im stuck hehe ;)

One cool idea might be a cgi paper (there are some in the streets scens if i rememeber that could say something like"LUTHOR AT LARGE" or "CRIMINAL MASTERMIND ON THE RUN"

 

 

p.s. please get your ass into gear i want to show people your cut, but not till its done.