This is absolutely great work, Adywan! But it also brought some logical thoughts to me with it. I think screenplay should be overdubbed from
"Our first catch of the day" to
"Our first target today".
It came immidiately to my mind as I saw SD shooting at Rebel Transport. Makes one wonder why are they shooting at them if they want to "catch" them. You might overdub it yourself too , cause you're english. :-)
720p looks really great. Cheers and a big thanx!