Adywan, I have a different suggestion instead of using this scene. Restore the original scene of Lando, Leia and Chewie running down the hallway but put windows on the left wall, instead of the balcony. I suggest this for three reasons.

1) The very next scene after this one, you see the three of them from behind back inside a hallway again with no real segway. It just doesn't look right. The lighting is wrong and you get no hit that they were ever outside. Also when 3PO is talking to R2 while on Chewie's back we see R2 in the hallway, when he should still be outside on the balcony, the lighting again doesn't fit.

2) This scene was just a spot for the Lucas' special effects team to showoff the Cloud City skyline, nothing more.

3) I remember you saying when you first started this edit you liked the tight feels of the hallway when our heroes are running and trying to catch up to Fett before he leaves. What changed your mind?

I don't mind the balcony too much. I just think a wall with large windows would work better. Our heroes stay indoors, so the scenes stay consistant, but we still get to see the skyline. As always the choice is yours. Keep up the good work, Adywan.