Sry for the delay guys, Im a bit ill and the fever blocked my sensors.
So after I saw that 005 and bingowings work a bit
I made my part.
1. We see the battle, the camera is behind the DS and pans slowly up.
*more battle
*Cockpit shots
*Some dialogue
2.The camera stops and zooms a bit. We see a mass starting revealing behind the planet.
*more battle
*"Now they are two of them"
3.The new star fires.
*Some shots of ROTJ
*more battle
4.We see executor heading to DS
5.Before the hit
* Explosion
I didnt include the "inner" shots but you can take an idea.
-Angel